Brin J.

Joined January 2022

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I have a few stories and poems inside me that I want to share. Maybe, if I'm lucky, they'll reach people who'll enjoy them. 📖

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Feedback Needed!!!!!
I need some help with my blurb! What do you guys think? I know it's kinda long, but I'm trying to give a broad overview of what my book is about. However, I'm willing to gut what seems unnecessary. The book is a blend of sci-fi and fantasy (more sci-fi). Those who love Zodiac Academy by Caroline Peckam will definitely enjoy this. (Okay, I'm a little biased.)
By Brin J.about 16 hours ago in Critique
The Formula to Developing Your Characters
Let me start off by saying I'm not declaring myself a genius at character development in any way, as I've only finished one novel. But I've read a lot of books to improve my writing, and have been following lectures from a few great authors, publishers, editors, and literary agents on the topic, so I've gained a lot of insight that I'm eager to share here for those who don't have the luxury of attending these lectures or who just want a brief summary.
By Brin J.a day ago in Writers
Incomplete
ever felt incomplete crying out for that missing piece lost to the vast universe, hidden within its umbra? I have peace eludes me
By Brin J.8 days ago in Poets
Our Shadows
epidemic of the worst kind; humanity's negligence can we not see the shadows we cast on the world? looking down but never actually receiving
By Brin J.8 days ago in Poets
60 Second Ride
An adventure. That was what Astrid wanted. She didn't think it was too much to ask for, keeping her expectations realistic when, in truth, she imagined a journey to a distant land or a daring quest through uncharted territories. What she got instead was a rickety old merry-go-round in Morison Park that squeaked and rattled with each turn.
By Brin J.11 days ago in Fiction
Top Story - April 2024
in her shadowTop Story - April 2024
eyes always went to her first caught by her powerful feminine charms looking through me like I didn't exist it stung, but I never felt envy
By Brin J.15 days ago in Poets
What makes a hero?
every hero has a story crucibles, sculpting their moral fiber leaving their legacies written in stone- inspiring the masses
By Brin J.15 days ago in Poets
The Countdown
Fire will spew across the sky. It hasn't happened yet, but in a minute, the atmosphere will be aflame, filling the surrounding air with a smokey fetor of fumes.
By Brin J.20 days ago in Fiction
diminution of existence
entities of light, caged in a gilded prison left in an umbra of darkness, isolated from the universe, powerless and without purpose,
By Brin J.24 days ago in Poets
Twin Flames
embers of the golden sun circling the lunar disc, as if they were timeless lovers, intimacy of a devastating kind perhaps the most powerful, and
By Brin J.about a month ago in Poets
Epic Love
epic love begins with a force of nature, celestial bodies aligning after living in contrasting ends of time locked in their cosmic responsibilities,
By Brin J.about a month ago in Poets
Eternal Orbit
eternal yet tragic love story ever seen, casting their shadows over us leaving us in tears over their pining, if only to remind us of the
By Brin J.about a month ago in Poets

Brin J.

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Feedback Needed!!!!!

The Formula to Developing Your Characters

Incomplete

Our Shadows

60 Second Ride

in her shadowTop Story - April 2024

What makes a hero?

The Countdown

diminution of existence

Twin Flames

Epic Love

Eternal Orbit

Achievements (2)